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Holy Knight
03-04-2004, 11:19 AM
Maaf kalau jelek... ^^;

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Not Just an Ordinary Thief

Have you ever wonder
A thief walking through the brightest day
With a smile charming and tender
Leaving a trace one should never lay

Even when we met each other
No sign of distrust came from my sense
But then this mind couldn't help to bother
Why did I felt an unusual tense ?

Holding to the deepest reality
I'm not sure if this is just another fantasy
For this is the only thing I can say
That she stole my heart away

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Wind Serenade

Look...
From the top of ashen vale
Where the ancient wind assembles
Forming the chain of destiny

Listen...
To the melody it carries
Which whispers in the silence
Gently and full of grace

And feel...
As it flows through the vein
Warming the frozen heart
Empowering the deepest will

Then live...
Like one's seek sincerely
A long way to achieve
A bright world eternally

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jojox
04-04-2004, 07:15 AM
nice,...
love this line!! :D

-I'm not sure if this is just another fantasy


wind serenade..
keren2...nice overshadowing,
neat and engaging....

jojox,

LeLuna
10-04-2004, 01:09 PM
IT RAWKZZ!! ::itrocks:: Terus-terus berkaryaa!!!