SHE

[toradoshi]

steam was up to my neck
tighten up surround my head
losing up my sight for the
trully romance!
she...was my trouble and my mistake
surrounding with my glorious love
tempting me with a sin
she...has had my haert and hold it tight
help....cause she wont let go
help....cause i lose my ground
in the tample of wisdom
i seek my self, my old soul!
who oftenly apart the heavens and hell
but, gooosh....where is it?

she...surround me with a kiss
thousands lie running from her
tounge
cold lips i taste
sorrow i felt

in the name of love
she hold me
and i lose my ground
cause...she ....she help me to love!
but she....she hurt me the most!


hihihih....kalo ngga asik, maafin ayee yee!! namanya juga
pemula!!:D

[BraveHeart]

asik asik aja kok bung tora
:)
yang penting, luapan hati dan kreasi yg timbul dari dalam sukma.

[Imajica]

D:D:D........
angota baru yak?
hehehehehhe
welcom at poem world!

[Imajica]

When I see this new world..
I now you will always there for me..
When I go to another place..
You still stand there for me..

When I turn my self ...
You still want forgive me..
I feel so little in front of you...
I fell so guilty to you...

[asti mochtar]

move your step twice than before..
move your step more faster today..
move your finger more often today..
use your voice more loudly than before..

you can if you want..
don't look you back side again..
you can if you want..
you just to shy to pick up the line...

move your step twice than before
move your finger more faster today
use your voice more loudly than before..
just close your shy heart..
and do it..
NOW!!

[toradoshi]

tuk wa tuk wa..langkah tegap majuut jalan!!!:D

[BraveHeart]

gua naek mobil deh, ngak jalan ..
broommmm brunnmmm ngeeenggggggg
tin tinnnnn

hehehehe chao

bentar lagi tahun baru
heheheh
:)

met tahun baru 01

[asti mochtar]

:D:D.......awas kecemplung!!:D:D

[toradoshi]

maaak byuoooor!!!:D

[BraveHeart]

hehehee mobil gua mobil amphibi hehehhe

kecemplung ntar ngapung
kaya capung yg merayap di payung
aji mumpung biar untung
jual pantun di pasar burung.

nah lo... ngaco abis

huehuehuehuehe

[toradoshi]

aku

kencaaaang....ku ayun kaki ku
cepaaat...ku asah otak ku
biarkan memantul
biarkan mengudara
jangan sampai jatuh
.....
.....
.....
....
buuk.....tapi jatuh juga!
ku sadari'
tenyata hidup ini
terkadang jatuh
tapi diri harus
bangkit dan terus berlalu!

[morningdew]

hehehe...rame ya :) met taon baru ya all..:)

[BraveHeart]

toeett toeeett
bunyi terompettt

hehehe tahun baru
semangat baru
gaji harus baru heuheuee
mobil mudah2an baru
rumah baru wuah boleh aje deh kalo ada yg mo nyumbang
hehehhe

met tahun baru lagee
:)

[surya_]

Tumben Tora buat topik di sini...Puisi lageee.. :D:D

[morningdew]

gue juga bingung :D:D:D

btw, bosnya MI kalo ngomong bukannya : this disc will self-destruct in 5 seconds? :)

[surya_]

Itu seh MI udah jamannya Tom Cruise..udah pake disk...Kalo jaman dulu mah cuman file doang.. :)

[asti mochtar]

Tora..lagi reformasi!
:D:D

[morningdew]

ayo dong pada mosting puisi. kok jadi kayak curpri nih :D:D

[surya_]

Kalo puisi karya gue gimane..mo dengar nggak?? :)

[morningdew]

ayo posting, sur, gue tungguin nih :)

[surya_]

Coba aja liat di CurAs, dew.. :)

[morningdew]

udah liat ;)

[D0SA]

Why did she walk into my life
when my life didn't need her?

Why did she offer love
when I had nothing to offer?

[BraveHeart]

sometimes things happened as we didn't want to
sometimes we don't have any answer at all
and life goes on ...
just look up and walk ..
coz life is much more worth it if we live it..

take care on your journey of life


..

[morningdew]

enough, is for all the pain you give me
enough, is for the bruises you do to my heart
enough, is for the tears rolling down my face
enough, is for the scar you left unattended
enough, is for the wound you never bandaged
enough is just enough :(

no more, jakarta, 030101

[surya_]

Ini yang elo maksudkan yah dew?? He did it again?? ::marah!::

[morningdew]

:(

[surya_]

Fokus dulu di kerjaan deh...jangan mikirin terus yang semalem... I wish u r getting better... :)

[morningdew]

thanks...

[surya_]

Sama-sama... :)

[toradoshi]

jahanaaam:P:D para pengacau cupri dan curas merambat ke sini...hus...hus...kembali ke asalmu:D

[morningdew]

yeeee...kita kan pada mosting puisi, weeekk :P

[surya_]

Ini topik tertutup rupanya.. but, who care.. :P:D

[morningdew]

tertutup gimana emangnya? ;(

[toradoshi]

sur pasang msn dooong man!:)

[surya_]

Nggak bisa, man!Kalo gue install, nggak bisa send message. Port untuk chatting ama Messenger diblok tuh sama corporate di Canada...emang reseh amat management, kagak bisa liat gue senang!! ::marah!::

[morningdew]

kasiannya dikaw, sur :(

[surya_]

Emang kasihan.. :(
Buset dah...pake diblokir segala...

[morningdew]

makanya, pas ketemuan langsung dugem aja ama anak2 :D:D:D

[surya_]

Iya seh...pengen tau gue apa segila mereka ato lebih gila yah.. :D:D
Aku mau balik dulu nih hanis.. Take care you... ::bye::

[morningdew]

percaya deh, mereka gila beneran :D:D

bye dear :)

[BraveHeart]

eh ... kalo gua posting2 di sini ... ntar gua ikut gila ngak? ....
gua emoh loh jadi gila hhehehhehe

kidding guys :)
peace ^_^

[toradoshi]

brave heart kenalin ini temen temen gue tukang ngobrak ngabrik kg....surya...dan morningdew...para orang orang yang cucok untuk pelipur lara!!!:D

lets keep on poeming!!

i watched the tv show the other days
showing how corrupted this world by the name of love
i watched a person crying out loud
but my hands are tight
yes ....pal i watched it all
with my eyes wide open~!

don't you think that we don't know
your game
your stinky game
who put it all nicely
in the name of love

love...money
love...power
love...soul
its all been fake!
and love hurts.!!!

but my hands are tights
but my heart is sealed
but my feet is numb

i try to tell to all
but i can't
caused i play it well too
caused i'm a sinner too!:(

[morningdew]

this game called love
this foolish game called love
this ache of the heart called love
this stupid game called love...

[surya_]

I take this from one of my fav songs..

How can I just let you walk away, just let you leave without a trace
When I stand here taking every breath with you, ooh
You're the only one who really knew me at all

How can you just walk away from me, when all I can do is watch you leave
Cos we've shared the laughter and the pain, and even shared the tears
You're the only one who really knew me at all

So take a look at me now, 'cos there's just an empty space
And there's nothing left here to remind me, just the memory of your face
Take a look at me now, 'cos there's just an empty space
And you coming back to me is against all odds and that's what I've got to face

I wish I could just make you turn around, turn around and see me cry
There's so much I need to say to you, so many reasons why
You're the only one who really knew me at all

So take a look at me now, 'cos there's just an empty space
And there's nothing left here to remind me, just the memory of your face
Take a look at me now, 'cos there's just an empty space
But to wait for you, well that's all I can do and that's what I've got to face
Take a good look at me now, 'cos I'll still be standing here
And you coming back to me is against all odds
That's the chance I've got to take, oh, oho

Just take a look at me now

[morningdew]

when everything is against all odds
just put your head up high
and accept everything that comes your way..:)

[toradoshi]

2 orang diatas nih ribut mulu....:o

[surya_]

Diem-diem ntar nggak laku warung lo.. :D

[toradoshi]

sur....!! kon iku ngga duwe msn...ngga duwe icq....ggak asiik rek!:o;D
pasaang...dong...masa ngga bisa nge heck compie siih!!:D:D

[surya_]

Gue hack server, bulan depan gue yang dihack sama bos.. :D:D
Emang nggak asyik neh... :(

[toradoshi]

:P:D:D

[BraveHeart]

ok deh, smile aja for today
:)
have a nice day all ^_^

[morningdew]

I Thought She Knew

She was my once in a lifetime
Happy ending come true
Ohhhhh I, guess I should have told her
I thought she knew
She said I took her for granted
That's the last thing I would do
Oh I'll never understand it
I thought she knew

I thought she knew my world revolved around her
My love light burned for her alone
But she couldn't see the flame
Only myself to blame
I should have known
I should have known

A heart full of words left unspoken
Now that we're through
I'd sell my soul to have this silence broken
Oh I thought she knew (I thought she knew)

I thought she knew my world revolved around her
My love light burned for her alone
But she couldn't see the flame
Only myself to blame
I should have known
I should have known

She was my once in a lifetime
Happy ending come true
Woahhh I guess I should have told her

But I thought she knew (I thought she knew)
I thought she knew (I thought she knew)
I thought she knew (I thought she knew)
Ohhhhh I thought that she knew

[surya_]

Gue juga ntar cari puisi SHE deh.. :)

[morningdew]

bener yah?..:)

[Sapta Nugraha]

Woman's Song
by Sitor Situmorang

Hearing you sing
with no hope in your voice
I believe that victory will be had
by those who mourn

Oh, faithful woman
no doubt it is your song that stirs my body
from the welter of grief
that raises a new dawn
and some day, when all this is past
that is you will accept my love
stiff and bloodied
prostate at your feet

[toradoshi]

goood gooodl....keep on poeming guys!!!:D

[BraveHeart]

para poem-ers makin lama makin mantaps :)

Dew, i thought she know sapa yg bikin?

:)

[toradoshi]

Originally posted by BraveHeart
para poem-ers makin lama makin mantaps :)

Dew, i thought she know sapa yg bikin?

:)



huahahahaha....brave hart...."i thougt she knew itu lagunya nsync!!!:D"

[morningdew]

Brave, bener kata tora. sori, gue lupa kasih credit buat Nsync :) pa kabar? :)

[BraveHeart]

hahaha gua kuper juge hehehe lagu nsync aja ngak tahu,
tapi kaga apa2 deh hehehhee
baek neh, pa kabar juga dew, tora, de el el :)

[serenade]

She..maybe the face I can't forget
it traces treasure or regrets,
maybe my treasure or the price I have to pay
She..maybe the mirror of my dream
the smile reflected in the stream
She may not be what she may seem, inside her shell..