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asteroid_b612
13-03-2000, 05:00 PM
I ONCE HAD A TWIN SISTER

i once had a twin sister
she was small and tiny and
so pretty swimming beside me
in our mother's womb.
we had fun together.
snuggling up so close to each other,
telling stories and little jokes
of our own,
giggling and snickering quietly there
under our mama's tummy.
she was really a nice company, my twin.
but nothing ever last forever,
doesn't it?
so then, on that -- i didn't know what --
day, or hour, or minute
-- i hadn't really known --
i saw her getting smaller and tinier i couldn't even see if she was also getting prettier.
and the wall of our mommy's womb,
it was starting to close in,
closer,
and tighter,
and closer.
oh, my poor little twin sister.
such a pretty little thing.
there was just no enough room for you.
and there was just no enough choice for me.
i needed more space,
more air,
and you were, oh, so little...
like a tiny buzzing bee
you would be gone right away.
right when i drew my breath.
oh, my, and you were just right there.
under what would later be my nose.
and so as i took that huge pull of air,
forgive me, my sis,
it was the last time i saw the form of your body.
and it was only like a small blob of dot.
so, i had a twin sister once.


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[This message has been edited by asteroid_b612 (edited 13-03-2000).]

surfergirl
10-04-2000, 10:56 AM
lucu juga....

btw- siapa sih 'twin sister' nya???
(sori abis nggak 'dong' sih)

asteroid_b612
13-04-2000, 02:04 PM
hehe... nggak ada..
itu cuma metafor doang..
artinya sih kurang lebih tentang gimana sesuatu itu (terutama yg nyenengin) nggak selamanya bisa berlangsung terus... caahhh!! :P

deadvoid
15-04-2000, 02:00 AM
kewl...

asteroid_b612
15-04-2000, 03:28 PM
gee.. thanks...

deadvoid
16-04-2000, 12:47 AM
kasih lagi dong....

asteroid_b612
17-04-2000, 02:22 PM
hehe.. kasih lagi?
umm.. kenapa loe nggak masuk aja ke site yg gue tulis di atas?
atau ya uda deh.. mungkin ntar gue post di sini.. cuma for the mean time.. masuk ke 'pathetic' aja dulu. 'kay?

asteroid_b612
17-04-2000, 04:04 PM
eh, ada satu nii..

walking to the sun
in a shower of golden rays
i am nothing
but
a shadow

aphrodiva
21-04-2000, 11:33 AM
Shadow..
where ever it is..
But still a reflection...
of who oneself really is

And the golden ray..
Where ever it is..
Still make a shadow..
of oneself's wisdom and kindness

But dark hearted cloud
Where ever it is..
Still make a shadow..
of oneself's enemy

asteroid_b612
22-04-2000, 12:51 AM
heey.. fine piece!! love it a lot!

aphrodiva
23-04-2000, 03:18 PM
thanks...it just appeared in my head...

deadvoid
25-04-2000, 11:26 PM
kalo lirik lagu lo suka nggak sih?
kan sebenernya lirik2 itu bisa dibilang puisi juga...

Unable so lost
I can't find my way
Been searching, but I have never seen
A turning, a turning from deceit

Cos the child roses like
Try to reveal what I could feel

I can't understand myself anymore
But I m still feeling lonely
Feeling so unholy

Cos the child roses like
Try to reveal what I could feel
But this loneliness
It just won't leave me alone

I'm fooling somebody
A faithless path to roam
Deceiving to breath this secretly
This silence, a silence I can't bear

Cos the child roses like
Try to reveal what I could feel
And this loneliness
It just won't leave me alone
And this loneliness,
It just won't leave me alone, ohh no

asteroid_b612
26-04-2000, 09:58 PM
yeah, i like song lyrics.
dan yg loe tulis itu baguuus deh.
lirik siapa sih?

krupuk
27-04-2000, 11:33 AM
nice..nice...and beautiful. makasih, mau share lyrics and puisi2 itu...

deadvoid
27-04-2000, 09:32 PM
:) thanks. itu dari portishead...judulnya numb.

asteroid_b612
28-04-2000, 04:29 PM
ooh, portishead. pantesan.. soalnya gue suka banget sama mereka. tapi gue bukan fanatik jadi i really know nothing 'bout 'em. cuma seneng aja denger musiknya..

deadvoid
29-04-2000, 08:41 PM
lo suka group apa lagi??

asteroid_b612
03-05-2000, 01:27 AM
hmm.. banyak! gue suka ampir segala jenis musik sih. well, contohnya... smashing pumpkins(!!!), echo belly, cardigans, ...aaah, banyak, deh.. *smiles*

deadvoid
06-05-2000, 01:21 AM
echo belly musiknya kayak gimana sih? btw kalo lo suka portishead mungkin lo bakal suka sama cocteau twins...beda sih bukan trip hop....tapi enaaknyaa...wooo....kayak sate kambing pake bir!! hehehe....

asteroid_b612
09-05-2000, 09:11 AM
echo belly itu kayak shed seven tapi yang nyanyi cewek. gue tau cocteau twins tapi seinget gue, gue belom pernah denger lagunya. hm.. cuma karena gue sering denger lagu dan biasanya gue suka lupa judulnya en penyanyinya.. mungkin aja sih gue juga pernah denger. :)

deadvoid
11-05-2000, 09:49 PM
kalo lo suka musik2 trus sama liat2 vid.clip gitu ke launch.com aja....di situ lo cari station gue....ok?