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Le Ciel
25-07-2001, 11:07 PM
Love's Crack

Free but not as free as I want
I've discovered and I've realized
You fly over the earth to the horizon
And I'm tie to the ground
Like a dog in the chain
Crying but no one cares
Tired of trying to get free
Just sleeping in a deepful thought
You there like a butterfly
Going to the petals you like
But never touch the ground, always floating
Am I wrong to love you?
Only the sad time comes
When the butterfly dies and falls to the ground
I can touch you and feel you in my arms
With tears and blurry eyes. . .

Altius_one
27-07-2001, 04:29 PM
Not bad man !!!!!!!
hehehe it's a nice poetry

Mbah Kangkung
27-07-2001, 04:52 PM
Mbah was amazed

Sapta Nugraha
28-07-2001, 06:17 PM
it hurts ..
it hurts ..

it is so painful ..
it is not just an accident ..

it hurts ..
it hurts ..

it is something ...
it is unbearable ...